Wednesday, January 9, 2013

Snakes Eating Their Own Tails (It's a Circle)


I know I said twice a week. Maybe this will be my twice this week and I won’t post again until next week. At this stage of the process there really isn’t much writing going on. It’s a lot of musing and imagining and whittling away at ideas. I figure that’s a big part of the process so let’s talk about it as it happens.

If you’re thinking about writing a screenplay, whether it’s a short story, novel, screenplay, or anything else it can be pretty daunting when you start considering all your options. How do you start? What kind of story will it be? Should I outline first? Do note cards? Write a treatment? What’s the genre? Who’s the main character? How does it begin? How does it end? On and on and on. There are so many things to consider it can be overwhelming pretty fast. Hopefully you’ve got a seed of an idea that started you on the process and it’s most likely a good idea to start with that idea and build out from there. In this case I didn’t start with an idea beyond what was stated previously.

Where do I begin?

There are three elements of a story that feed each other in an endless loop: Plot, Character, and Theme. The character is revealed through the plot. The plot is driven by the character. The theme is revealed by the character interacting with the plot. So let’s see if anything strikes a chord as I consider plots, themes, and characters that might be interesting.

Plot

They say there are only 5 stories. Or 7. Or maybe it’s 13. Depends on who you talk to and what books they’ve read. There’s man vs. nature, man vs. self, man vs. I’m bored. Yes, at the most basic level there are very few stories out there. But a good story doesn’t have to be an entirely new idea that has never existed before. A good story is more than that. Obviously I don’t have any great ideas popping into my head regarding plot. I guess this won’t be a story derived from plot. We could have a great discussion about stories derived from plot so bring it up in the comments if you have some thoughts.

Theme

Themes, much like plots, can be boiled down to simple terms. Love, hate, anger, despair, joy, and peace are all examples of very simple themes to start with. As a theme I’ve been considering maturity as it relates to men. What does it mean to be a man in our modern American culture? Who are the great male role models of our time? Where do we learn what qualities are “manly”? In a way this could be a story about the search for identity.

I’m a big fan of Maslow’s Hierarchy of Needs as a tool for developing story. If a character is struggling to find shelter they probably won’t be that worried about their self-esteem. It’s a pretty valuable tool. If the theme is love then your character probably feels safe. A starving person doesn’t care about making out as much as they care about eating some food.

So if this story is about learning to be a man (whatever that might mean) it’s more about self-actualization than safety. Many of those lower tier needs are either met before the story begins or need to be met throughout the course of the story. Huh, that might be a good structure for the plot. A character that makes their way through the hierarchy might work. Food for thought.

Character

For me this is where the story comes from. Stories derived from theme can easily become heavy handed and preachy since everything is crafted to serve that theme. A story derived from plot can be complex and engaging but can just as easily be inaccessible and dry. It’s rare to find a plot or theme so interesting that it makes up for weak or uninteresting characters. The main character of a story should be someone you want to spend 2 hours hanging out with. If you’re like me you probably don’t watch Castle because the plots are all that engrossing. You probably don’t watch it to learn something deep and meaningful about life or love. I keep watching that show because I like hanging out with Richard Castle.

A main character doesn’t have to be likeable. Far from it. You can despise the main character. But, no matter how you feel about the character, the audience must want to spend time with them.

So I’m going to start with the main character.

To sum up

I’ve got a theme to work with, a possible plot (thanks Maslow), and the decision that the story will be derived from an interesting main character.

This is pretty basic stuff so if I’m putting too much time into talking about it let me know in the comments.

Next time we’re going to develop the main character. Let’s hear some possible names, traits, flaws, jobs, anything you guys think might be interesting for a character.

10 comments:

  1. I like the 'how to be a man' theme, needs to start with how it's ok to be a boy. Too many times boys are considered naughty when they are just exploring the world and active.

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  2. possible character flaws...always guessing what the people who are talking to him are going to say, finishing their sentences, but oh so incorrectly...very distractable because, let's face it, the people around him are just a little bit too slow for him...likes animals so much that he cannot eat half of his meals...uses ellipsis too much

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  3. thinking about names I decided to look at a list of US Presidents. The only ones that are not commonly used now..at least in the first names..seems to be Millard and Quincy and Rutherford.
    I think the trend these days is for people to name their kids names that seem like they come from western novels...so we could look up some old cowboy type names.

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  4. Christi, I really like the uses ellipsis too much idea. Could be a really funny quirk. Laura, Millard is a good name. Old cowboy names could be a lot of fun too.

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  5. Flaw - not making a decision even on a little matter. Cowboy name could be Flint. He can light his cigarettes with a match struck on the bottom of his boot.

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  6. I am watching a surf movie with dad and one of the guys is named Harley. It made me think that or Harlan might be good names.

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  7. totally unrelated: what do you mean by plot driven? I have been thinking about place driven story. Is there a name for this? I love sailing and am fascinated by monastic communities. I got to thinking that a ship would be a great place to have a monastery- a floating monastery cuz they are by def rather isolated. there is lots of work to keep them busy,a rigourous schedule (all those watches breaking up the day and night into shifts - just like monastic prayer rounds) and of course the interesting things that happen in a single-sex environment (not experimental homosexuality - just the potential for deep bonding that happens when you are not distracted by romance with the opposite sex). So there it is- I don't have a character or a complication but I like this alternative floating monastic world idea. I am perfectly aware that I may be the only person in the world who thinks so.

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    1. Melitta, that's not unrelated at all. My meaning with plot driven is that it's a story where the characters are reacting to events that are being forced upon them. Another term might be plan driven. The story is being propelled forward along the planned route of events and characters are there to react to each planned event but don't necessarily cause or change the plan. The writer's plan of events for the story rather than the villain's actual plan isn't affected by the character's choices. I think movies like James Bond are great examples of plot driven stories. Bond is working his way through the plot (in his case a literal villain's plot or plan) but his character remains essentially the same throughout. The new Bond films have more character depth but they are essentially plot driven. There are great plot driven movies and there are some real stinkers. Roam netflix (particularly the thriller or adventure movies) and you'll find loads of movies where the characters are essentially cardboard cutouts who are there just so the plot can happen. Those are the bad versions of plot driven movies.

      While I'm not aware of a specific name for a story driven by a place it's possible one exists. When I'm talking about character, plot, or theme driven stories I'm referring specifically to what is central to the story. Is the theme central to my story? If so, everything is affected by and motivated by that theme. Crash and Babel were (in my opinion) theme driven. The challenge you're faced with is to imbue the location with a sort of will of it's own so that it can affect the story.

      I think the idea of a floating monastic community is really interesting. What is life like in a place like that? How isolated are they? What conflicts arise just due to proximity? It's got a lot of potential. There are some cool movies about monastic environments; The Name of the Rose with Sean Connery was a great mystery. I suggest developing this place and seeing what characters might pop out to you as a good way for us to experience this really cool place.

      Does that help? Make any sense? You've got a great seed to grow a story out of it would be great to hear about your progress with it.

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  8. He's a eunuch cowboy named Millard Flint. He left the all-male oceanic monastery where he was raised and dreamed of conquering the wild west and began his Maslowian journey. Besides overusing ellipses, he has a temper and is sensitive about his manliness--especially since becoming a eunuch early in the journey. Through his journey we will see man vs. nature, man vs. man, and man vs. self. Ultimately, he is the perfect antagonist to explore the theme of what it means to be a man. But to truly understand the fullness of Millard Flint's character, you must know his antagonist, but that's a comment for a different blog...

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    1. Look at you jumping ahead to antagonists. I was going to get all controversial up in here about antagonists and the need for them but you beat me to it. =)

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