Wednesday, September 4, 2013

Gangsters and Landslides

Series of Shots

I haven't used this tool before in this script and quite honestly it's a tool I generally don't use very often at all. It's called Series of Shots. I'm using it to identify that we're cutting between two or more locations rapidly in a scene. It's great for maintaining a fast pace in the script. I need to use the tool more often.

Hope you enjoy the new pages.

 

 

 

Tuesday, August 20, 2013

Smooth Criminal

I couldn't think of a better title.

I missed last week. It annoys me. Sometimes these things happen. I've got new pages for you though and I won't pontificate. I hope you enjoy them.

 

 

 


Tuesday, August 6, 2013

Literally Non-Literal

It’s Not As Complicated As It Sounds

One of the key concepts that I teach is something I refer to as Literal and Non-Literal imagery. This deals with combining words and images to communicate ideas. This is the very heart of filmmaking and possibly the most important tool in a filmmakers kit. As filmmakers we have to communicate ideas using sound and picture. When these two things are working together they can communicate immensely complicated concepts in seconds.

Foundation

To understand how this works we need to understand how people interact with film. About 100 years ago this Russian dude named Lev Kuleshov did an experiment. In the experiment he alternated from a shot of Vsevolod Pudovkin, a famous actor at the time, to a shot of a bowl of soup, to Pudovkin, then a girl in a coffin, to Pudovkin, then a woman on a couch. Audiences were amazed at Pudovkin’s performance. They said he expressed pensiveness over forgotten soup, deep sorrow over the loss of a child, and lust for the woman on the couch. The trick here was that each shot of Pudovkin was the same shot. His face was the same each time. The audience interpreted his, intentionally blank, expression to have meaning based on the images it was juxtaposed to. To put it another way, two images placed side by side create a third idea. Take a look at Kuleshov’s experiment and listen to Hitchcock describe how it works. These guys are smarter than I am and it will make more sense if you listen to them.

The Basic Idea

Combining images creates ideas in the viewer. When you add audio such as music, sound effects, and dialog it adds another element to the equation. As writers we really only have influence over the dialog. We have some influence over sound effects, but not much, and far less influence over the music. So how do we use what Kuleshov taught us in writing? We use Literal and Non-Literal imagery.

Building On The Basics

Last week I asked you to consider 3 things.
  1. Show it don't say it.
  2. If you show it don't say it.
  3. If you show it say it.

What do these mean? First, if it’s at all possible don’t have characters talk about something, show the something. If they’re talking about a bank robbery, show the bank robbery. If they’re talking about a space ship, show the space ship. Second, when you show something, don’t describe what the audience can see. Characters shouldn’t go around telling us what we’ve already seen. It’s tedious and shows a lack of trust in the viewer. If you show a bank robbery don’t follow it up with the characters saying “wow, we just robbed a bank and this is how we did it.” The third point is tricky, showing what you say. Since film is a visual medium you should show everything you possibly can. If two people claim to be in love, show that they’re in love. In film words are only as good as the actions that back them up.

Alright, take a moment to absorb these two concepts.

·      Images juxtaposed generate ideas in the audience that neither image can generate on it’s own.
·      Dialog should support what is seen but not describe it.

Here’s a break for you to let that sink in before I move on.

Literal and Non-Literal Imagery

With those two concepts in mind let’s discuss Literal and Non-Literal imagery. Literal imagery is when the image is exactly what is being said. Non-Literal imagery is when what is being said is unrelated to the image. The images and words are only connected because they are played together.

Here’s an example. Imagine that the words are being spoken as the image plays on screen.


“A tree in the mist.”


“I had forgotten what it was like to be home.”


“The universe is a vast and complex place.”

The first example is literal. That is literally a tree in the mist. There’s no complexity and it simply describes what you can already see. This fails to use the power of juxtaposing words and pictures to create new ideas.

The second example is less literal but it still gives a sense of what we’re looking at. The person speaking is probably telling us that this tree has something to do with being home. It might also generate some other more esoteric ideas in the viewer. Maybe the mist is a symbol of lost memories and so forth.

The third example might be the least literal since the image isn’t complex, vast, or the universe. What ideas does this pairing of words and image conjure in your mind?

A Range Of Possibilities

So that’s Literal and Non-Literal imagery. You don’t want to be all Non-Literal in your work and you don’t want to be all Literal in your work. Think of it as a sliding scale. You can go to the extremes but usually you want to keep things in the middle. You want to keep the combination of words and images on topic but not so Non-Literal that it’s a fight to make any sense of what’s going on or so literal that the audience is constantly being told what they already know.

When in doubt be Non-Literal.

Questions? Comments? Does this make any sense? Let me know in the comments. Tell us what you think the combination of images and words mean in the examples.


And now more pages.

 

 

Thursday, August 1, 2013

"Don't Tread On Me" - Earth

Forward Momentum

It's nice to be making some progress with this again. I wanted to take some time to talk about a few writing things today but I think I'll have to save that for next week. If you want to prepare think about these concepts.


  • Show it don't say it.
  • If you show it don't say it.
  • If you say it show it.


That's it for the preview. Here are the pages.

 
 

Tuesday, July 30, 2013

Sometimes Lemonade Turns Into Lemons

Oh Well

So that amazing new gig didn't end up working out. Oh well. Such is life. At least I can get back on track with this script. I was going to write a lot more today but I decided to leave off at this point for two reasons.

Reason 1: I'm quitting when I know what to write next. Yep, I know exactly what happens next and I'm excited to write it. It will be that much easier to get back at it next time.

Reason 2: Too much writing becomes bad writing. No, my writing on these pages isn't all that spectacular. If I kept at it the writing would rapidly degrade.

I'm not a fan of quitting but taking a break at the right time is crucial.

Here are the new pages for you. I hope you enjoy them. I'll be back soon with more.




Thursday, July 11, 2013

Round House Kick To The Toe

They Said It Couldn't Happen

I have no idea who they are. I have no idea why they would say it couldn't happen. I don't even know what it is. These are new pages though so that's something.





Friday, July 5, 2013

NERDTACULAR!

The Super Bowl of Nerdtaculars

Nerdtacular 2013 happens today. Next year I might even get to go. The Woman said she wants to go. So that hurdle has been crossed. Here's hoping. And here's more Harlan.

 
 








Thursday, June 27, 2013

Getting Back In The Groove

It was a little tough getting back into the swing of things with these guys. But I think these pages turned out alright. Thank you note cards for reminding me what's going on.


 


Tuesday, June 18, 2013

I'm Late. I'm Late. For A Very Important Date!

After Action Report

I know, I know, I said a month and we're ten days past that. It's still the same month I said I would come back so technically I'm not late with this. Right? I knew you would support me on that one.

In The News

Okay, the move is complete and it came with a great new job. This is a good thing. But it means I have a lot less time than I had before to work on this script. Never fear though, the adventures of Harlan and Nathan will continue but probably at a slower speed.

Coming Soon

With my new schedule and other life changes I think it would be best if I altered our agreement slightly. I said I would post twice a week. I think once a week is going to have to be the new goal. I don't have new pages for you to see today but next time you should expect them.

Reminder

Getting back into the script is a little daunting. Where was I? What was supposed to happen next? What in the world was I thinking? Good thing I have those note cards to look at. See how I reminded you of the process that got us to this point and how to recover from a long break? Pretty slick.

Pray I Do Not Alter It Any Further

So that's the latest. Harlan will return very soon. Instead of biweekly adventures it will be the weekly adventures. Maybe with more pages per post, we'll just have to see.

Thanks for waiting patiently.

Wednesday, May 8, 2013

Pam Short Has Broken Both Her Legs And I Want To Dance With You

Pause

I'm going to take a few weeks off. I'm behind on another project and need to get caught up. I'm also moving. So this is your chance to get caught up. If you're behind. I'll be back in June.

Tuesday, April 30, 2013

Aardvark

Yeah, why not? Aardvark.

 
 
 Next time: More Pages.

As always, leave some comments and let me know what you think. Or don't. It's cool.