Series of Shots
I haven't used this tool before in this script and quite honestly it's a tool I generally don't use very often at all. It's called Series of Shots. I'm using it to identify that we're cutting between two or more locations rapidly in a scene. It's great for maintaining a fast pace in the script. I need to use the tool more often.
Hope you enjoy the new pages.
Planning to Fail follows the process of writing a screenplay from the initial idea through planning, writing, rewriting, and finally submission. You'll get to see all the burps, blemishes, and hurdles of writing a story that will probably see only rejection after it's done. That's okay, we're planning to fail. Start at the beginning or just jump in. This is original work. If you feel you need to use it for something just contact me, I'm pretty reasonable.
Wednesday, September 4, 2013
Tuesday, August 20, 2013
Smooth Criminal
I couldn't think of a better title.
I missed last week. It annoys me. Sometimes these things happen. I've got new pages for you though and I won't pontificate. I hope you enjoy them.
I missed last week. It annoys me. Sometimes these things happen. I've got new pages for you though and I won't pontificate. I hope you enjoy them.
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Tuesday, August 6, 2013
Literally Non-Literal
It’s Not As Complicated As It Sounds
One of the key concepts that
I teach is something I refer to as Literal and Non-Literal imagery. This deals
with combining words and images to communicate ideas. This is the very heart of
filmmaking and possibly the most important tool in a filmmakers kit. As
filmmakers we have to communicate ideas using sound and picture. When these two
things are working together they can communicate immensely complicated concepts
in seconds.
Foundation
To understand how this works
we need to understand how people interact with film. About 100 years ago this
Russian dude named Lev Kuleshov did an experiment. In the
experiment he alternated from a shot of Vsevolod Pudovkin, a famous actor at
the time, to a shot of a bowl of soup, to Pudovkin, then a girl in a coffin, to
Pudovkin, then a woman on a couch. Audiences were amazed at Pudovkin’s
performance. They said he expressed pensiveness over forgotten soup, deep
sorrow over the loss of a child, and lust for the woman on the couch. The trick
here was that each shot of Pudovkin was the same shot. His face was the same
each time. The audience interpreted his, intentionally blank, expression to
have meaning based on the images it was juxtaposed to. To put it another way,
two images placed side by side create a third idea. Take a look at Kuleshov’s experiment and
listen to Hitchcock
describe how it works. These guys are smarter than I am and it will make more
sense if you listen to them.
The Basic Idea
Combining images creates
ideas in the viewer. When you add audio such as music, sound effects, and
dialog it adds another element to the equation. As writers we really only have
influence over the dialog. We have some influence over sound effects, but not
much, and far less influence over the music. So how do we use what Kuleshov
taught us in writing? We use Literal and Non-Literal imagery.
Building On The Basics
Last week I asked you to consider
3 things.
- Show it don't say it.
- If you show it don't say it.
- If you show it say it.
What do these mean? First,
if it’s at all possible don’t have characters talk about something, show the
something. If they’re talking about a bank robbery, show the bank robbery. If
they’re talking about a space ship, show the space ship. Second, when you show
something, don’t describe what the audience can see. Characters shouldn’t go
around telling us what we’ve already seen. It’s tedious and shows a lack of
trust in the viewer. If you show a bank robbery don’t follow it up with the
characters saying “wow, we just robbed a bank and this is how we did it.” The
third point is tricky, showing what you say. Since film is a visual medium you
should show everything you possibly can. If two people claim to be in love,
show that they’re in love. In film words are only as good as the actions that
back them up.
Alright, take a moment to
absorb these two concepts.
·
Images
juxtaposed generate ideas in the audience that neither image can generate on
it’s own.
·
Dialog should
support what is seen but not describe it.
Here’s a break for you to let that
sink in before I move on.
Literal and Non-Literal Imagery
With those two concepts in
mind let’s discuss Literal and Non-Literal imagery. Literal imagery is when the
image is exactly what is being said. Non-Literal imagery is when what is being
said is unrelated to the image. The images and words are only connected because
they are played together.
Here’s an example. Imagine
that the words are being spoken as the image plays on screen.
“A tree in the mist.”
“I had forgotten what it was like to be home.”
“The universe is a vast and complex place.”
The first example is
literal. That is literally a tree in the mist. There’s no complexity and it
simply describes what you can already see. This fails to use the power of
juxtaposing words and pictures to create new ideas.
The second example is less
literal but it still gives a sense of what we’re looking at. The person
speaking is probably telling us that this tree has something to do with being
home. It might also generate some other more esoteric ideas in the viewer.
Maybe the mist is a symbol of lost memories and so forth.
The third example might be
the least literal since the image isn’t complex, vast, or the universe. What
ideas does this pairing of words and image conjure in your mind?
A Range Of Possibilities
So that’s Literal and
Non-Literal imagery. You don’t want to be all Non-Literal in your work and you
don’t want to be all Literal in your work. Think of it as a sliding scale. You
can go to the extremes but usually you want to keep things in the middle. You
want to keep the combination of words and images on topic but not so
Non-Literal that it’s a fight to make any sense of what’s going on or so
literal that the audience is constantly being told what they already know.
When in doubt be
Non-Literal.
Questions? Comments? Does
this make any sense? Let me know in the comments. Tell us what you think the
combination of images and words mean in the examples.
And now more pages.
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Thursday, August 1, 2013
"Don't Tread On Me" - Earth
Forward Momentum
It's nice to be making some progress with this again. I wanted to take some time to talk about a few writing things today but I think I'll have to save that for next week. If you want to prepare think about these concepts.
That's it for the preview. Here are the pages.
It's nice to be making some progress with this again. I wanted to take some time to talk about a few writing things today but I think I'll have to save that for next week. If you want to prepare think about these concepts.
- Show it don't say it.
- If you show it don't say it.
- If you say it show it.
That's it for the preview. Here are the pages.
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Tuesday, July 30, 2013
Sometimes Lemonade Turns Into Lemons
Oh Well
So that amazing new gig didn't end up working out. Oh well. Such is life. At least I can get back on track with this script. I was going to write a lot more today but I decided to leave off at this point for two reasons.
Reason 1: I'm quitting when I know what to write next. Yep, I know exactly what happens next and I'm excited to write it. It will be that much easier to get back at it next time.
Reason 2: Too much writing becomes bad writing. No, my writing on these pages isn't all that spectacular. If I kept at it the writing would rapidly degrade.
I'm not a fan of quitting but taking a break at the right time is crucial.
Here are the new pages for you. I hope you enjoy them. I'll be back soon with more.
So that amazing new gig didn't end up working out. Oh well. Such is life. At least I can get back on track with this script. I was going to write a lot more today but I decided to leave off at this point for two reasons.
Reason 1: I'm quitting when I know what to write next. Yep, I know exactly what happens next and I'm excited to write it. It will be that much easier to get back at it next time.
Reason 2: Too much writing becomes bad writing. No, my writing on these pages isn't all that spectacular. If I kept at it the writing would rapidly degrade.
I'm not a fan of quitting but taking a break at the right time is crucial.
Here are the new pages for you. I hope you enjoy them. I'll be back soon with more.
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Thursday, July 11, 2013
Round House Kick To The Toe
They Said It Couldn't Happen
I have no idea who they are. I have no idea why they would say it couldn't happen. I don't even know what it is. These are new pages though so that's something.
I have no idea who they are. I have no idea why they would say it couldn't happen. I don't even know what it is. These are new pages though so that's something.
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Friday, July 5, 2013
NERDTACULAR!
The Super Bowl of Nerdtaculars
Nerdtacular 2013 happens today. Next year I might even get to go. The Woman said she wants to go. So that hurdle has been crossed. Here's hoping. And here's more Harlan.
Nerdtacular 2013 happens today. Next year I might even get to go. The Woman said she wants to go. So that hurdle has been crossed. Here's hoping. And here's more Harlan.
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Thursday, June 27, 2013
Getting Back In The Groove
It was a little tough getting back into the swing of things with these guys. But I think these pages turned out alright. Thank you note cards for reminding me what's going on.
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Tuesday, June 18, 2013
I'm Late. I'm Late. For A Very Important Date!
After Action Report
I know, I know, I said a month and we're ten days past that. It's still the same month I said I would come back so technically I'm not late with this. Right? I knew you would support me on that one.
In The News
Okay, the move is complete and it came with a great new job. This is a good thing. But it means I have a lot less time than I had before to work on this script. Never fear though, the adventures of Harlan and Nathan will continue but probably at a slower speed.
Coming Soon
With my new schedule and other life changes I think it would be best if I altered our agreement slightly. I said I would post twice a week. I think once a week is going to have to be the new goal. I don't have new pages for you to see today but next time you should expect them.
Reminder
Getting back into the script is a little daunting. Where was I? What was supposed to happen next? What in the world was I thinking? Good thing I have those note cards to look at. See how I reminded you of the process that got us to this point and how to recover from a long break? Pretty slick.
Pray I Do Not Alter It Any Further
So that's the latest. Harlan will return very soon. Instead of biweekly adventures it will be the weekly adventures. Maybe with more pages per post, we'll just have to see.
Thanks for waiting patiently.
I know, I know, I said a month and we're ten days past that. It's still the same month I said I would come back so technically I'm not late with this. Right? I knew you would support me on that one.
In The News
Okay, the move is complete and it came with a great new job. This is a good thing. But it means I have a lot less time than I had before to work on this script. Never fear though, the adventures of Harlan and Nathan will continue but probably at a slower speed.
Coming Soon
With my new schedule and other life changes I think it would be best if I altered our agreement slightly. I said I would post twice a week. I think once a week is going to have to be the new goal. I don't have new pages for you to see today but next time you should expect them.
Reminder
Getting back into the script is a little daunting. Where was I? What was supposed to happen next? What in the world was I thinking? Good thing I have those note cards to look at. See how I reminded you of the process that got us to this point and how to recover from a long break? Pretty slick.
Pray I Do Not Alter It Any Further
So that's the latest. Harlan will return very soon. Instead of biweekly adventures it will be the weekly adventures. Maybe with more pages per post, we'll just have to see.
Thanks for waiting patiently.
Wednesday, May 8, 2013
Pam Short Has Broken Both Her Legs And I Want To Dance With You
Pause
I'm going to take a few weeks off. I'm behind on another project and need to get caught up. I'm also moving. So this is your chance to get caught up. If you're behind. I'll be back in June.
I'm going to take a few weeks off. I'm behind on another project and need to get caught up. I'm also moving. So this is your chance to get caught up. If you're behind. I'll be back in June.
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Thursday, May 2, 2013
Too Many Words
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Tuesday, April 30, 2013
Aardvark
Yeah, why not? Aardvark.
Next time: More Pages.
As always, leave some comments and let me know what you think. Or don't. It's cool.
Next time: More Pages.
As always, leave some comments and let me know what you think. Or don't. It's cool.
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