Just power through
Sometimes you finish a scene and just know in your bones
that you nailed it. That it’s a
fantastic scene and you’ve
really done some of your best work. This is not one of those times. Other times
you write a scene and you’re
embarrassed to admit you
had anything to do with it. This is one of
those times.
Why even bother?
About half way through the scene I knew it stunk. Not just
stunk but really stunk. I started with a very
fuzzy idea for the scene
and it went downhill from there. The dialog was dull, the characters were
uninteresting, and it was going nowhere. Why did I keep writing? I could have
easily stepped away and decided to go at it another day. I’ve done that. I don’t
like to do that though. If I walked away in this scene I know I would have an
extremely difficult time getting back into it next time. I would be wresting
with the scene and not getting the script written.
SFD
Remember that this is the s**tty first draft. It’s supposed
to be bad. The goal is to get it written. I think the purpose for the scene is
sound. It’s supposed to show how Harlan relates to his family. I think we need
this information about him. But this scene is really bad. In the next draft,
when we come back to the scene, I’m sure it will be a very different scene. I’m
fine with that. I’ll fix it in the next pass. For now I have something there to
remind me of what’s supposed to happen. I have something that will remind me
what the bad version of the scene looks like.
Punishment
Enjoy the stinker, next time let’s hope it’s a little
better.